Sicily Sites

You may have seen this online but I thought I'd share it here, too. It's my story of my trip to Sicily with my sisters and Mom. The story has been "published" on two different food & travel websites.
One of the sites, the Tripatini site, edited the story quite a bit--in my opinion "dumbed it down." The other site pretty much left it as I wrote it--it's the Global Writes site, a website for food and travel writers. Compare and tell me what you think...

http://blog.tripatini.com/2010/02/08/i-got-all-my-sisters-with-me-plus-mom-in-sicily/

http://www.global-writes.com/chronological/index.html?-Token.article=139&-Token.index=1

Enjoy the story!